Angel of Death

Hello again! Ah this was another great chapter. Finally Isaac and Sophia have a scene together because I was starting to worry that things were going downhill for her...though its ...

Hey Ash, This was such a sad chapter and it kinda reminded me of the time I was watching Becoming Jane and Jane left Tom so that he could provide ...

Hey Ash, thanks for the heads up! I loved this chapter! And I really adore William. There's just something about him that's different than the usually over-confident perfect male counterpart ...

Hey Ash, I read this yesterday on my phone because I wasn't home. This was great and William did kinda seem not human but now that you've confirmed that he ...

Hey Nolan, long time no see, eh? Another lovely poem. It was powerful and yet like I said to someone before, it wasn't heavy. It just flowed well to the ...

Tis another great poem Kris!!! You have a way of getting a message across without making into thick and calorie filled. So now when I read poetry, my mind isn't ...

Hey Jig!! You posted! When I seen this I couldn't wait to read this, so instead of doing my work in school I secretly read this and loved every bit, ...

Hey Esme, I thought I'd take a peak and I am not disappointed but just...lost. It was just too short for me to critique and my brain can't function because ...

Hey Olivia! First off, I don't want to make this one of those complimentary reviews because this is a true story and if it applies to you, then I am ...

Hey KJ!!! I liked this chapter. It described High School well and yet it also showed Rebecca's life more clearly. Now the reader knows exactly what she goes through and ...

Wow another great story Ash. I can tell because there was a good last sentence, and though I hate cliffhangers I'll be sure to stay tuned in for more. Please ...

Hello there! Well I can't believe no one reviewed this yet. This was a great example of unexpected. I really did like this story but in cases like this, you ...

ello Cal! Felt enchanted today so I decided to come round to you. Ah this was a great story. It was kinda morbid at first but it ended up being ...

Hey KJ!! Ahh this was a sweet chapter. I really liked how Dane and Genny fought, it was quite amusing. Especially sense I could sorta imagine it in my head. ...

Hey Kylan! I loved this chapter and the descriptions and the language, as always...but...there were some things that weren't sitting right with me. I thought that Charlie was way older ...